Friday 19 March 2010

Neurosis Draft (without music) Feedback



This is what we have so far, however, there are a couple of shots missing and there isn't any music added yet. We uploaded it onto facebook and youtube to see what people thought of it how it was and if the messages that we wanted to convey were conveyed effectively. By doing this in advance of the deadline it will give us a chance to see if we need to make any changes and to see if we have successfully made our film appeal to our target audience. Here is what we asked the audience to comment on:


These are a mixture of the comments that we received:






Overall, I would say that most people thought that he was sinister (or that someting wasn't right about him) and that Mia was being portrayed as vulnerable. A couple of people said that they didn't know that she was vulnerable until the end of the opening two minutes when the pictures were displayed. However, I don't see this as a bad thing because it means that within the opening two minutes it is shown that she is vulnerable and we have sucessfully conveyed what we wanted to.

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